I've been randomly browsing the forums tonight, out of boredom, and came across this and I had to let you know that I loved it. Very well built story, very well written (I insist on your writing skills. I'm impressed) and somewhat funny. Good job!
I'd change a little tiny thing though ...
The next afternoon, Colonel Admonitor, Warden Yasskul Obadji, and Sergeant Trask were quite chummy together. They sat in the Warden's office, Obadji behind his desk, and Trask and Admonitor sitting in the two chairs in front of it.
Normally, shouldn't Obadji let Admonitor have his chair behind the desk as a sign of respect since he's the highest ranked officer? Just a thought.
Gibberlings make nice fur coats.